max’s adventure

Once upon A time there  was a fish called max. He was at home in the morning when the water school bus came. He ran outside and hopped in. Once he found out that he had to go the long way. he  hated the long way because he was scared. Half way in the tunnel he found a hole . He hoped in aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr bang. ‘’wear am I ‘‘ Hello      is there anyone their       hello. He started to walk through the tunnel. He herd something. Hello who’s their’’hi ‘’he said in a shy vice. ‘’How did you get down here’’. ‘’their was a hole in the tunnel’’ said max. ‘’How did you get down here ‘’.’’dose it matter’’. ‘’Suppose not ’’ .’’come with me’’ .’’ said the shy fish’’ . So max went with the shy fish. When they got more into the tunnel and the shy fish took of a mask and said ’’I’ll get you ‘’. And then he started to run away. He hid and the fake shy fish ran past .he didn't know that he had gone past so max had to be careful of all of the evil fish. Once the evil fish was about 100 meters down the path he hopped out of his hiding place. There was three to five evil fish talking to get him so he hopped back in to his hiding spot but it was too late. They had found him and they garbed him and brought him to their master. He was scared but he was brave. He was in the middle of  their master cave and their was about 50 to about 100 evil fish in the cave. So he decided to brake out away from the 5 evil fish so he swam up to the top of the cave and said ’’that it ’’ so he swam back up down and hit the floor bang. He got back up looked around all of the evil fish were gone he said ‘’ it’s over ‘’ to the king of evil fish. He went full speed at the king he said ‘’how do I get out of here ‘’ in a deep voice. The king said ‘’ down that hall and there is a hill on the left ‘’ in a scared voice. So he went in his direction and he ran up the hill. He was so happy that he was back on the surface and he was going to make a big story out of his big adventure............